R-04 FILM EXTRACT: Feedback on our film extract Wednesday 25 February 2009 Feedback on our film extract Our basic plot for our film is based on a 17 year old girl who begins to read the thoughts of everyone around her. An unknown man contacts the girl by every means of communication possible but never in person. He seems to know everything about her and her gift, she begins to think she is becoming insane and attempts to find the unknown man to find out more about her gift and why he knows so much about it.Whilst trying to track him down she overhears the thoughts of a stranger whos thoughts disturb her, this leads to attempts to help and save him, a disasterous conclusion follows... Our extract - Where the main character realises and tests her "gift", this is the beginning/middle of a film. Feedback 1) Actors unbelievable- members of public Busy street shot-very good. Liked the speeding up effect Liked the hearing thoughts of members of the public Didn't like how it slowed down after the public scenes.Would have been better to put the titles between the fast paced bit and the slow paced bit. 2) Overall story line is good Good variety of camera shots 360 shot of lisette was a good idea but could have been better Editing was good throughout And music works well with the clip. 3) Good shot types and variety of angles Busy street shot very effective Start of the phone call camera shot was good Zooming in to faces and hearing thoughts very effective "Hot dog" was only the bun 4) Good use of sound effects Liked town scene and special effects Storyline- interesting Shakey camera work during bedroom scenes Could of cut shots of computer to make everything a bit tidier Good locations. 5) Love the fast camera shots/movement/editing Music fits brilliantly with fast shots Loved the crackly sound Turning of the camera when she turns over on the bed-clever Liked the voices of others around her. Labels: Fern Clark posted by AS Film Studies Students @ 13:54   0 Comments: Post a Comment << Home     Recent Posts Our Rough Cut! :) Editing Our Footage (: Filming Problems we faced with our sound effects Problems we faced during filming Costume and Location Ideas Our Rough Script for our film extract Films Clips that inspired our film extract idea Camera Angle, transition and shot ideas Intresting Directional use in Films Post Archive Post Labels All FILM EXTRACT Blogs Group R-01 Group R-02 Group R-03 Group R-04 Group R-05 Group R-06 Group S-07 Group S-08 Group S-09 Group S-10 Group S-11 Group S-12 Group T-13 Group T-14 Group T-15 Group T-16 Group T-17 Group T-18 Group U-19 Group U-20 Group U-21 Group U-22 Group U-23 Group U-24